So, in accordance with Mr. Engles wishes, Ethan and I had someone peer review our rough cut. So, without further ado, here is Sebastian Ameerali’s peer review!
Peer Review: Sebastian Ameerali
1. What is The Setting Time and Place? How Can You Tell?:
Withlacoochee river park from the start the sign says so.
2.Who are The Characters? How Can You Tell?:
Campers because of the setting and the props such as a tent and campfire.
3.What is The Movie Going to be About? How Can You Tell?:
Most likely a slasher based off of the standard conventions of campers in the woods and somebody dying right off the bat.
4.What Genre is The Film? How Can You Tell?:
Horror because of the suspense and dark theme of the film.
5. To What Extent is It Readable as a Film Opening?:
Creates suspense that will later be revealed whats happening creating the opening to a story.
6.Overall, How Might The Clarity of Meaning in The Video be Improved?:
Add audio so that it’s easier to follow but other than that all good.
Now having read this, you’d think our opening was great, however I think the rough cut was kinda meh, and he was just being nice. However I still have high hopes for our final project! Editing should be done shortly, and I am excited to see how it turns out!